31 January 2012, 10:28 am
I'm writin a book and I want to know if it sounds good or not so there are seven people (one of seven are missing) and they were genetically enhanced before they were born so they could have great mental and physical abilities, like being very fast, being able to tell what people are thinking from facial expressions et cetera. those seven are pawns for their father to say commit crimes and get revenge on those who cross him and they will take the blame, and they will take the punishment instead of him. skylar o'neal moves to north Cali, where she meets the six pawns in high school, and somehow she finds out that she is the missing pawn and her mother was killed because she didn't want her daughter to do those things and she ran away with her and remarried. her step father moved to north Cali from the south to try and run away from Mr. Alain (still thinking of 1st name) but it turns out he was in northern ca. all seven children were born from all different mothers. main characters: iris, Colton, Liam, Addison, June, and Felix Alain. (all half siblings and the pawns) skyelar o'neal, secretly their half sibling. aly Millard, killed for the sake of Skye finding put about the pawns. Mina Lee, one of Skyes friends. still working out kinks. suggestions? opinions?... Read More »
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